Audience feedback for my rough cut

Here are some of the positives that I learned from the feedback and that they particularly liked:

• The storyline
• The transition between the story and the live performance
• The ending (spray paint and fade to the sky)
• The song choice
• the framing of the shots "interesting and you can see the emotion on the actors face"
•  The wide screen effect

But also they gave me a few pieces of constructive criticism:

• Lost their attention - needs to be more vibrant
• lip syncing is out at he start
• didn't understand the hidden messages "like the hat and the bottle dropping"
• Titles at the start are a 'bit shabby' and can be improved on

I think all the feedback is fair and constructive and I will try my best to resolve anything that they didn't like about it.

I will make a different post that shows any changes that I decide to make between my rough cut and my final cut.